Dooomster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario The LifeGuard]

not bad

um you said something about size?
i reccomend optimising sounds/flash :)

captaindrbob responds:

thanks

[Waffle on the Ceiling]

lol

i liked the bit, where he said, okay you have seen the woffle, now get out! XD

NeoSkywalker responds:

thanks. I had fun animating that part.

[Jointz]

short but quite good

its good , but im afraid your going to have to work on its length, but i think that is due to it being your first flash and you putting muc h detail in the other frames,
it flowed smoothly which was good to see, but you might want some background music next time for it, i reccommend trying to get the amberial 2 music, i had that on while i was watching this ;) it improves it MASSIVELY especially if your short of sound
if you are short of sound you might want to try
http://www.flashkit.com/ i get my sounds from there :)

and this is the end of a loooonnnnggg loooong revivew, i gave a 5/5

F951753animations responds:

Thx! And the next time ill make a meny and bg music